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jamieearlsblues

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PostSubject: there is a life   Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:33 pm

everyday you can see
even god can touch
things can turn
even life can get on and on and on

there is a life i gotta do
there is a life is bothering me
that i can get rid of
it making me guilty

im breaking in tears
i just wanna scream
that i can get rid of
it making me guilty

i can't get rid of my life
it stuck on me
it making me guilty
make me wanna scream

i just wanna dry my tears
but everyday it stuck on me
it making me wanna scream
it just can't go on to see what i did
so there is a life what make it
special for you and me

repeat chorus:
there is a life i gotta do
there is a life is bothering me
that i can get rid of
it making me guilty

everyday you can see
it's just a life is just a memories
that god can touch
the way i can


i hope yall like this song i wrote it my self
write on this if u like this

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PostSubject: Re: there is a life   Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:23 pm

I like it. Some errors like you need for pluralization of words, and I see it as a poem more than a song but it's great.

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