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SpiritualHeart

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PostSubject: Blue's Poems   Blue's Poems I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 03, 2009 8:04 pm

Strolling outside,
On a dark scary night.
I hear weird voices,
speaking to me,
out of nowhere.
I follow the voices.
At last, I hear the voices,
loud and clear.
I fall into a deep hollow hole.
I climb out,
blood dripping from my nasty scars.
Then....
my legs were gone!
Where are my legs?!

Sorry that poem doesn't have a title. I know it's not very good.


Will write some more
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PostSubject: Re: Blue's Poems   Blue's Poems I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 04, 2009 1:51 am

where your legs gone?
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PostSubject: Re: Blue's Poems   Blue's Poems I_icon_minitimeThu Feb 05, 2009 7:38 pm

No. What? It's just a poem
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PostSubject: Re: Blue's Poems   Blue's Poems I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 06, 2009 1:58 am

i know i just making a joke
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PostSubject: Re: Blue's Poems   Blue's Poems I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 17, 2009 1:36 pm

Interesting poem, with quite a twist at the end!

I quite like how you decided against using a rhyme scheme, somehow I think it fits the scene that you're trying to portray, with the chaotic atmosphere.

Can I ask where you got your inspiration for this? =)

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