Lady Mega
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 | Subject: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me  Thu Apr 09, 2009 12:47 pm | |
| What if someone left you and you said you'd be together forever?.....
I Thought
I thought we'd be together,
Forever.
Then you left me.
Your ignoring the pain,
You can clearly see, what you've done to me.
I Thought,
We'd be...
Together.....
I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
But then you left me.
I Thought,
I Thought,
I Thought.
We'd be together.
I thought we'd be...
The perfect couple..
Please stay with me.
Oh why did you have to go,
You know I really love you so,
I Thought...
You loved me.
I Thought,
We'd be,
The perfect couple.
Please stay with me.
I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
But then you left me,
All broken-hearted,
Its been 2 years since we parted.
All alone, I want you back.
I thought,
You loved me.
I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
Can't you see?
I love you, why wont you love me?
I Thought.....
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NinjaDragon1
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| | Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:45 pm | |
| Hmm I don't really know much about poems or songs so I don't think I can be any help on the matter.
I did like it tho, very sad....made me feel lonely lol | |
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Lady Mega
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| | Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:48 pm | |
| I was watching tv when writing this so that probaly influenced me
Anywho thankyou anyways | |
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Nicolas 47
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| | Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:07 am | |
| it is good
but i like shorter poem | |
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Red-dead
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| | Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:08 am | |
| Maybe that as a song would be nice with a slow, sad tune. | |
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Lady Mega
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| | Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:10 am | |
|  Thanks and yeah | |
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